The blood was sticky already, but the assassin didn’t grunt or even slump, barely recognizing the gash in the side’s existence. He was a trained killer, a master of his trade, dangerous and always present and alert. His heart had calmed, the adrenaline back in its stores, ready to rush through the killer’s veins again, give him the extra strength, focus, even luck needed in times of need. More
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Consolidating My Fiction Writing 4cmnts
I’ve reached a decision. I will consolidate my fiction writing under one banner, namely a subdomain under tdhedengren.com, the domain hosting the very blog you’re reading. It’ll be a separate entity, this fiction section of my site, since I don’t want to mix things up too much. Many thanks to those who weighed in on this matter in my previous blog post, and also to those who sent me e-mails of encouragements. It’s interesting to note that none was against this move, although some pointed out that the branding of the various worlds, whereas there are such, like Orn would be less persisting should I decide to consolidate the writing. That was also the original idea with OrnTales.com, enforcing the brand further beyond my writing by having it housed on a dedicated site.
No more, soon. I’ll announce my plans in the near future, and perhaps use the Easter holiday free time to setup a temporary site, and move the OrnTales.com content there. It would be nice to start The Green Knight story on its intended place.
Again, thank you for your input, dear readers. I appreciate it!
Quest for Knighthood VI: The Stand, Yet Again 0cmnts
Stiel watched the soon rise from horseback. It was shrouded in red indeed, blood had been spilled and so the Heavens cried.
He had ridden out of Qaiel before dawn, after helping the woman with her wounds. She’d gotten away with a broken arm and some bruises - lucky, Stiel thought. They had found Falt in an old outhouse, tied up and dazed, but alive and fairly well. The farmer had cried out of joy, and vowed to come and visit the knight-in-waiting, bringing provisions, in a few days time. And of course he vouched for the green-haired man, telling the villagers - all woken up and gathered - what’s been happening.
Stiel’s name was cleared, justice served.
The first challenge of the Ceremonial Stand was over. It wasn’t a noble duel, or a jousting challenge from a knight, as would be ideal and the stories told, but still. The knight-in-waiting had fought for honor and justice, and for his ideals, which was good enough.
Two more to go.
Stiel came upon the Windy Bridge, feeling numb. He wasn’t sure if it was the cold morning winds and the rain in the air, or the blood spilled on his hands.
Washing it away just didn’t help. The red sun had told him that.
So ends Quest for Knighthood.
Stiel’s adventures will continue in The Green Knight, available early 2008!
Quest for Knighthood V: Retribution 0cmnts
The moon was gazing lazily on the village of Qaiel when Stiel reached it, hand on the sword hilt and ready for anything. It would get ugly, he knew it, the tension held the air.
Tomorrow’s sun will rise in a shroud of blood, Stiel mused, but felt no joy in it. This was what had to be done, for honor, for justice, and for himself. What he had trained for, been born for.
This was his first Ceremonial Stand.
The scattered houses were dark, all of them. A thin strain of smoke could be seen from some of them, but they were obviously covering their fires. He was expected, and fear clung to the quiet crisp night wind.
Stiel kept to the side of the street, trailing the houses’ walls, feeling lucky that this wasn’t happening in the city, where glass windows were common. Here, in the wilderness, windows were small holes in the wall, barred at night, and most of the days as well.
“He will come”, said a muted voice that Stiel recognized at once. It came from a house the green-haired knight just passed.
“How do you know? We scared him off, so we did!” said another voice that Stiel didn’t know. He sidled up to a barred window and tried to peak in through the cracks, but something was shrouding it from the inside, a cloth most likely.
“Because he’s a noble dumbass, you moron!” sneered the thug.
“Did he really kill Falt in cold blood?” asked a third voice, the voice of a woman.
“Yes!” sneered the thug again.
“Aye, he did”, said a fourth voice that Stiel thought belonged to the last of the thugs from the ambush at the Windy Bridge. The knight-in-waiting didn’t think it sounded very believable.
“We’ve been over this, woman”, said the first thug.
“It’s unlikely, that’s all I’m saying”, said the woman. “If you have a quarrel with him, take it out of our village, that’s all I’m…”
“Shut up!” roared the thug.
Right. Two thugs from the ambush, thought Stiel, and then there’s two unknowns, the woman and the first man.
I’ll take my chances.
Stiel went up to the door, and studied it. No light sipping out here either, which should mean that it’s covered. He pushed it lightly, but it didn’t budge. Probably barred, but the cracks between door and wall were wide enough for his blade, so he drew the sword, carefully slid it in, and found the bar at once. Gently, he tried it, and found that he could lift it.
The knight-in-waiting entered the simple house with force, and slammed the door shut behind him, barring it again in the same fluent motion.
He took in the one big room at a glance, seeing a horrified older man slump back towards the fireplace at the far end, and a stunned woman of forty or so years, grasping her plain woolen dress in surprise. The two thugs from the ambush stood by a table in the middle of the road. It was a simple home, with a packed earthen floor, beds made of hay and wool close by the fireplace. Cloth were covering the windows, and the door.
“You!” roared the big thug, and rushed for his club, leaning against the fireplace.
“You’re a liar and a thief”, said Stiel in a stern voice, pointing his sword at the thug, “and your life is now forfeit!”
The other thug snatched his long knife from the table, but backed towards the fireplace and his companion, not leaving Stiel with his eyes.
“Where is Falt, you scum?” asked Stiel, and advanced on the two thugs, while the man and woman backed against the opposite wall. “Where have you hidden him? Tell me!” he roared, making the knfie-thug startle. “And don’t tell me you’ve killed him, you little devils, or so help me by the Gods, I’ll make you pay!”
“We’ll tell you nothing!” roared the thug with the club, advancing. “You killed him!”
“I did no such thing and you know it!”
The knife-wielding thug cast a sideways glance at his companion, and then at the man and the woman by the wall.
“Falt’s not dead?” asked the woman suddenly.
“I don’t know, answered Stiel.” He had stopped his advance on the thugs. “They have him, I believe.”
“Is this true, Sombar?” the woman asked.
The thug with the club called Sombar spat on the floor.
“Oalp, is he speaking the truth?” she asked.
“No he’s not!” screamed the knife-thug shrilly, but the cry was as hollow as the truth in his words.
“You idiot”, muttered Sombar, and raised his club. “Now we’ll have to kill this moron knight, and then take care of those two!” He cast one evil glance at the man and woman. “Don’t move, and you might live.”
“That’s a good idea”, said Stiel in a cold voice.
Sombar took two steps forward, and then swung at the knight-in-waiting. Stiel easily sidestepped, bringing his sword up in time to deflect a low slash from Oalp’s long knife.
“I’ll smash your skull!” roared Sombar, and swung again and again and again. And with every swing came that low knife-slash from Oalp.
Stiel was forced back, not wanting to do a straight-on parry against the big wooden club Sombar was working so fiercely. The green-haired warrior remembered all too well how powerful this man’s swings were, and he couldn’t risk being dazed with the knife coming at him all the time.
He was so preoccupied with staying out of harms way, tiring Sombar’s arms so that he could retaliate, that he didn’t see the woman sneak up behind them.
“You bastards!” she screamed, and hit Sombar hard in the back with a chair.
The thug stumbled, and turned. At the same time, Oalp’s knife came at Stiel.
“No!” the knight-in-waiting screamed, as he deflected the knife, and took a quick step forward.
“Lord!” screamed Oalp, as he realized that Sombar’s club wouldn’t follow his slash this time, but Stiel was faster, turning the parry into an upward slash, tearing clothes, skin and flesh from Oalp’s chest and chin. The man fell back, screaming, but Stiel was already past him.
Sombar swung his club at the woman, who tried to get out of the way. The spikes and wood hit her in the side, twirling her through the air and crashing into the table, where she lay very still.
The thug swung around just in time to meet Stiel’s sword with his club, but this time it was the green-haired man who’s strokes were deadly powerful. Sombar staggered back, making desperate parry after parry, stumbling for his life.
He stepped into the fireplace with his left foot, recoiled out of instinct, and found himself impaled on the knight-in-waiting’s sword.
The club clattered to the floor, as Sombar gripped the blade protruding from just under his chest.
Stiel drove it in, to the hilt, and the thug screamed in agony.
“Where is Falt?” the knight-in-waiting asked. “Tell me, and it’ll be over quick.”
“Go fuck a goat!” gurgled Sombar.
He died hanging on Stiel’s sword.
Quest for Knighthood IV: The Village of Qaiel 0cmnts
“What are they doing down there?” said Falt, staring down at the village from a rock a way back.
“Looks like they’re gathering for some sort of council”, said Stiel, and patted his restless horse. He saw that well enough from the horseback. “What do you reckon?”
“I don’t know”, said Falt slowly, “but I’d like to find out. I’ll go down first and see what’s going on.”
Stiel raised an eyebrow at that, but said nothing. He’d come to trust the man, he was harmless, and this little trip to the village of Qaiel had assured him that Falt had indeed been a victim of the circumstances during the ambush at his Stand.
“Go ahead.”
“I’ll be back before sundown”, said Falt, dropped from the rock, and skidded down the slope towards the village.
Stiel dismounted, gave his horse a friendly pat, and then sat down with his back against one of those supposedly remains of that great mountain of giants. He sighed, looked at the sky and guessed that there were just over three hours worth of day left, then the darkness would start to sneak in. Plenty of time for Falt to get down and back.
He had a feeling, a disturbing feeling that something was wrong. Maybe he was wrong about Falt, or maybe it was something else.
Perhaps I’m just worried, he thought, about the Stand. Time is running out, a steady stream of hours and days, pouring away from me.
Sitting by the big moss-covered rock, almost nodding off, the glory of the Moranian Knights felt very far away.
***
Day turned to dusk, and Stiel was nearing Qaiel. Falt hadn’t returned, and the green-haired knight didn’t want to wait any longer. Besides, he still had that bad feeling, a growing one in his stomach. It was shared by his horse, who snorted and felt skittish.
Qaiel was a modest village, he knew that from his travels to the lowlands and the Windy Bridge that was his Stand, but now it seemed almost deserted. It was really just one dusty street, and some scattered one-story buildings. Simple dwellings for simple people, he thought, as he entered the small village.
“There he is!” a man screamed from a distance. The dusk was making it hard to see him, but he was a way in front of him, perhaps lurking in a doorway.
“Get him!” another man bellowed.
From the houses, five men emerged, all bearing pitchforks and clubs, advancing menacingly from the front.
“What is this nonsense?” snarled Stiel, and laid his hand on his sword.
“It’s payback time!” came a voice from behind, and Stiel knew who it was before he turned his head.
The burly thug from the other day stood there, spiked club in hand, and with him his companion.
“You killed my mate”, the thug bellowed, “and you killed poor Falt in cold blood, who just wanted to trade with you!” The thug then seemed to address his fellow villagers rather than him: “And all we wanted was to trade! Not fight! This so-called knight takes his rites too seriously! Will you kill a curious child next?”
“Liar!” roared Stiel, but he knew he was talking to deaf ears on this one. They may be gullible farmers and hunters, but they were outnumbering him, with five closing in on him, and another two behind him.
Still, vengeance was at hand, so Stiel violently turned his mount and thundered towards the two thugs, who barely got out of the way, cursing.
The thoughts were racing through the green-haired man’s head, as he galloped out of the village, chased only by taunts and curses from the villagers. Had they killed Falt? He still didn’t believe the poor man had been in on it, if he had he’d been in the ambush. So where was he? Dead or alive?
Alive seemed the more likely choice. There was no reason to really kill him, the thugs could scare him to silence for sure, they obviously had a strong hold on both him and the village.
Stiel made up his mind. “I’m a knight”, he whispered to the twilight, slowed down his horse and dropped from its back.
With his sword in his hand, and the shield on his back, Stiel darted from cover to cover, back towards Qaiel.
If nothing else, vengeance would be at hand.
Quest for Knighthood III: Scattered Rocks 0cmnts
“Well, Falt the Challenger”, Stiel said, looking down on the injured farmer. He had just about stopped the bleeding, and now he sat there, looking very miserable.
“I didn’t mean to…” Falt sobbed, unable to continue. “They made me…”
Stiel held up his hand. He believed the poor man. “Indeed they did”, he said, and shook his head. “And now one of them is dead and the other two running for their lives, I’d reckon.”
Falt quietly sobbed at this.
“Did you know them?”
“They are local men. Hunters and trappers.”
Stiel nodded. Dawn was upon them.
“They stole my mule”, Falt said sullenly.
“That they did.”
***
After they had buried the body, unceremonially, and shared food by the fire, Stiel bade Falt to tell him a little bit about himself. He came from Qaiel, where he had a few sheep and a little patch of dreary land. Food was scarce and he lived a simple life, alone, although he wasn’t shied by the other villagers or anything like that.
“It’s a dull place”, he explained, “where people come to hide or just because they have to be somewhere.”
The lowlands were a harsh place to settle, none of the great stone roads leading here, with little trade with the rest of the kingdom.
“Sometimes the plains people come to trade with us”, Falt said, “but mostly they stay out of Qaiel, and our way. We don’t bother each other much.”
Stiel nodded to that, a much preferred arrangement to the wars that had shaken Morania’s core boundaries barely a century ago, before the plains people and their speakers of the wind had been subdued, forced to peace. There were still tensions, he’d heard at the Academy.
“You know, they have a story about all these rocks and boulders”, Falt said, eager to break the silence. “The plains people that is.”
“Do tell it.”
“They say that the lowlands were once all a great slope around an enormous mountain. On this mountain, the giants of cold and warmth lived, a fearsome bunch it would seem since they used all mankind as slaves and wenches.”
Stiel nodded and poked the fire. It was growing dark.
“One day an old woman, all leathery and thin, came across the plains and approached the mountain. She asked the giants to leave her people, the plains people of course, alone. Naturally, the giants laughed. They had their way with her, in spite of her being ugly, and then ripped her limbs off.”
“Harsh”, Stiel commented.
“Yes. They were in for a surprise though. A great shrieking wind erupted from where the old hag’s arms and legs had been, and this wind flew up, formed a great fist, and slammed down on the giant’s mountain, punching it to small bits and pieces!” Falt said, and stifled a yawn. “These bits and pieces are the rocks and boulders that scatter the lowlands.”
“Is there a mountain, or a trace of one?”
“No. But the plains people have a shrill warcry, and are calling themselves Shrieks, so there’s something in the story I belive.”
Stiel nodded. “Usually, there is.”
They sat silent for a while, staring into the dark. Stiel thought of all the big rocks and boulders he’d seen while entering the lowlands, sometimes covered in moss, other times just standing over the plains grass, a mystery in itself. It was an explanation as any, he guessed, when thinking of Falt’s story, and no more ubelievable than the one of the First King of Morania, Conquerer of the West.
“Tomorrow we’ll ride into Qaiel and restock, your so-called friends got away with most of my supplies”, he finally said, coming back from his contemplations.
Falt yawned and nodded, looking at ease. His nose was broken, and the flickering firelight made his whole face look distorted. Stiel silently promised himself to settle the score with the thugs, should he run into them. After all, right was right, and he was sworn to do the right thing as a knight.
“We’ll sleep now”, he said, but looking at Falt he saw that the man, obviously exhausted, had already laid down his head.
Some updates just in time for the weekend 0cmnts
Just a quick blog post before I leave for the weekend.
I just published the World of Orn page. It’ll be a constant work in progress, but now at least there’s something.
I also updated the bio page, which will give you a little insight in what I’ve done so far, but it’s not much of an author bio yet. That’ll come with time, when it’s warranted, I’m sure.
Finally, I’d like to pipe in a push for my blog posts on writing over at rethord.com - that’s my blog. Take a look if you’re interested, they’re not directly related to Orn or OrnTales.com, but naturally they reflect my writing philosophy and whatnot.
Enjoy the weekend, and read a great book, as well as part two in the Quest for Knighthood story!
Fooling the Psyche, or how I can write twice as much fiction 7cmnts
I decided to start a little project this week. As you might know I’m also writing fiction, both for online projects (like OrnTales.com) and, well, offline things.
To further push myself to the fiction breathing monster of ten years ago, I’m willing to try any technique. My most recent one is very analog indeed. I decided to buy a Moleskine notebook, and a high quality ball pen that felt good in my hand. More
Quest for Knighthood II: The Stand 0cmnts
It had taken over a week until he saw the first human being approach the Windy Bridge, a poor excuse for an epic Ceremonial Stand. The bridge itself were hardly even necessary anymore since the pass it had once crossed now had fallen in, so a person on foot could easily cross, and Stiel could hardly see why any wagons would come out here, so far from the village Qaiel and civilization. Beyond the bridge were hills, and ultimately the mountain range that separated Morania from the Eastern Sea.
The burly man had approached the bridge, holding a wooden club with some rusty spikes, looked around, shrugged and then left. Stiel was glad for it, he had reeked of shit and disease, or just plain old stink, it was hard to tell which in the crisp air. No acceptable challenge, that meant that he was glad to be rid of him.
And now, a few days later, a second man approached, on a mule it would seem. Stiel stood on a rock, they laid littered all over the place here as well, partly covered in moss and lava. He had made his camp in the shade of one, built a simple shelter and dug a fireplace. They served as lookout points as well.
The man wore simple clothes, a farmer that had scourged his neighbors for necessary equipment for this endeavor, Stiel thought.
He knew that the man would challenge him, in spite of him being able to cross the small chasm without any real effort. The man’s sword that made a rhythmic clunky sound hitting against the plain wooden shield told him that.
“Ho, my good man!” he called, having jumped down from the rock and pulled on his hauberk and fastened his sword belt. His shield and helmet lay by the bridge’s foot.
“Ho to you, knight!” the man called back. He wasn’t far away now, so he dismounted and tied his mule to a bush, a scraggy old animal with brown fur and discolored spots. The beast started to devour the rash plains grass, at first with some doubts, but then finally settling for it.
Stiel stood firm while the man, appearing to be around his age, perhaps a bit older, fumbled with his sword and shield. It was simple equipment, and as far as he could tell, the man only wore thick layers of cloth, no real armor. He did put on a fur chestpiece, but it didn’t look much to the world.
“I challenge you, knight!” the man bellowed.
Stiel nodded. His honor forbade him to decline a challenge. “On foot, I take it?”
“What?”
“You challenge me to a melee battle on foot, I take it?”
“Yes, yes!” almost screamed the man, somewhat flustered. He looked around anxiously.
“We’ll cross swords”, Stiel said, but inwardly he shook his head at the poor state his challenger’s weapon was in, with rust eating its blade, “on the bridge then.”
Moments later, the two men faced off on the bridge. Stiel knew he frightened the pitiful man, it was all that the farmer could do but not to clack teeth. He knew why, as any onlooker would, seeing the poor posture and arms that the man sported, and then the strong pose of the Knight-in-Waiting, a trained warrior.
“I am Stiel of the Uthrum highlands, Knight-in-Waiting making this Stand”, said Stiel in a formal voice, as the custom bade. “You shall not pass.”
“My name is Falt of Qaiel and I challenge you”, stumbled the man, obviously uncertain of what he should say.
At that Stiel advanced, and Falt swung his sword in a wide arc, panic in his eyes. The Knight-in-Waiting easily deflected the blow with his shield, and made a few thrusts just for the sake of it, not actually looking to hurt the man.
Falt screamed with pain, as Stiel’s tip nicked him in the side despite this. The man was so unsteady on his legs that he’d stumbled forward, following his initial swing, that he almost threatened to impale himself on Stiel’s sword.
Stiel took half a step back, slashed out at the rusty sword, and almost managed to disarm poor Falt, who jerked it out of the way just in time, a stinging buzz in his hand.
A frenzy overtook the farmer then, screaming and wildly thrashing his sword and shield about, in no way harmful for the skilled Knight-in-Waiting. Stiel dodged a blow, parried another, and took two others with his shield. This man is a danger to himself, more than to me, he thought, as he waited for the breath to leave the crazed would be berserk.
Stiel’s horse neighed and made a thrashing sound from his small camp on the other side of the bridge.
“What the…” the green-haired man said, and managed to sneak a peak over his shoulder.
There, two men were trying to calm down Stiel’s horse, the beast not wanting to go with the unknown robbers, while a third was rummaging through the Knight-in-Waiting’s belongings, taking as much as he could.
“You bastards!” Stiel silently growled, turned towards his now very scared challenger, out of wind, and out of luck it would seem. Two quick steps forward, a quick feint to the right to open up Falt’s defenses, and then following up with the shield, slamming the farmer’s face hard and sending him to the ground in a blur of spurting blood.
“I didn’t…” started Falt, just before the hit actually registered in his head and he lost his bearings for a time, hitting the bridge without managing to keep a hold of his sword, the plain shield only staying with him due to the strapping that held it fast.
Stiel had already turned and was spurting towards the camp.
“Hold, scavengers, or I’ll chop you to pieces, you scum!” he screamed, enraged.
The one rummaging through Stiel’s camp took off, arms full of trinkets, pelts from Stiel’s hunting, and some other things that the Knight-in-Waiting had taken with him on the trip.
The other two, however, stopped fussing with the horse and drew weapons. One had a simple sword and a long knife, while the other had a spiked club. Stiel recognized him as the burly and foul-smelling man from a few days past.
Stiel slowed down somewhat as he neared the two, meeting the club’s downward blow with his shield, and actually dodging the low slash of the sword.
“You’ll regret this!” he bellowed, and struck out with his shield, forcing the burly man back, lashed out with a thrust of his sword, nicking the other thug in the thigh but nothing more.
The club came at him again, with quite some strength behind it this time, and Stiel had to deflect it to the side with his shield for fear of going numb with the blow. Another swing followed, with the same action from the green-haired warrior, but the pure strength behind the blows forced Stiel to just parry the simple but effective slashes from the other fellow.
“We’ll take your armor too, good Sir!” spat the club-wielder, as they forced Stiel backwards, much thanks to his swings. “And piss on your corpse!”
It was obvious to the Knight-in-Waiting where the danger lay here, so he dodged the next high-swung club, spurted to his right, towards the sword-wielding thug, and slashed out at his throat. The thug, not being fast enough to parry the attack safely, dropped to the ground and rolled away.
Stiel felt the club’s spikes gash his left shoulder as he spun about, but he ignored it and slammed the shield hard, flat side first, into the thug, who staggered backwards, more chocked than hurt, but somewhat dazed nonetheless.
That gave him time. At a flick of the hand, he loosened the shield’s strapping, turned and sent the other thug, just getting to his feet, sprawling to the ground again with a well-aimed kick in the belly. He then spun about and threw his shield, side first, at the club-wielder, who’d gotten his bearings again and was going for Stiel’s exposed back.
The shield hit him square in the throat, making him fall to the ground in agony, a scream dying with the lack of air.
Stiel spun again, and met the thrust from the other tug with his sword, sidestepping a poor knife-slash, and then he advanced, a series of high chops, which the thug had to parry using both sword and knife for fear of letting them through his defenses and cleaving his head. Stiel forced him back a step, and then another, with his seemingly ferocious assault.
Suddenly the green-haired warrior went down almost to a knee, and slashed low, upwards, under the thug’s parry, opening up his gut, spilling blood and entrails, a hot steamy mess spraying him.
Stiel spun yet again, just to see the other thug stumble away, he’d soon crossed the bridge and was stealing Falt’s mule, fleeing. Falt himself sat on the bridge where he’d fallen, trying to stop his nose from bleeding, looking thoroughly miserable.
The Knight-in-Waiting glanced at the dying thug on the ground, his hands trying to stop his life from running out of him, but the dirty puddle on the ground and the lack of strength in his eyes, in his movements, was telling enough.
Stiel lowered his sword. All was still.
Launching OrnTales.com - fantasy fiction for free, by yours truly 1cmnt
Yesterday I wrote about me getting back to fiction. Today I’m launching OrnTales.com, my fantasy fiction project. Be sure to check it out if you’re into these kind of things. There will be an on-going short story all the time, with two new parts published each week. The first one is called Quest for Knighthood, and the first part is up, with the next one due on Wednesday.
To me, this is an exciting project. It’ll be very interesting to see how I can use the blogging format, as well as the blogosphere - although it’ll be in parts of it that I’m not well-versed at all - for promoting my fiction.
For now, I’m happy to have launched it. This week have not started well, so I’ll settle for that.
Enjoy OrnTales.com, and be sure to tell me what you think!




